this is my nature poem about this image.
Nature
The sounds of the dancing trees are wonderful
The smell of the fresh air is lovely
The grass has a shower in the rain
The color of the clouds are white and they flow in the air
Nature is what takes my mind.
Kia ora Quinn,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your poem. I can tell you were really thinking about personification when you wrote it. You included personification about the dancing wind and the grass having a shower in the rain!
It is so great to see you trying new things with writing.
I wonder how did you feel after you wrote this poem?
Ka kite āno au i a koe
Hi Quinn, I agree with Mr Cossey. The idea that the grass had a shower in the rain is a very clever use of personification, how did you come up with this idea?
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