I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Quinn, I like that you are very precise about the measurements and equipment you need. I also liked that you used bracket () to give the reader extra details.
I would recommend using numbered points for each of the steps and to use a new line for each new step. That way, your instructions will be even more easy to read.
Hi Quinn, I like that you are very precise about the measurements and equipment you need. I also liked that you used bracket () to give the reader extra details.
ReplyDeleteI would recommend using numbered points for each of the steps and to use a new line for each new step. That way, your instructions will be even more easy to read.
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ReplyDeleteHi Quinn This is max. great recipe. I would like to eat some. Hope we get to make some. Maybe for Christmas. Maybe you should add some pictures.
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