I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, December 2, 2020
Tuesday, December 1, 2020
every day one by one
Every day one by one
Once there were 10 men that all had the same jobs and they were friends. Their jobs are news people and every time they weren't filming they would tell jokes and laugh. When they were they immediately turned serious and started to talk. One saturday they all did google meet. ‘’ hey guys do you want to practise our news so we can get a million views!?’’ ‘’ yeah!’’ they all said at the same time. So they waited till night so no one will know there in so they started to practise and something weird happened CCCCRRREEAAKKK, ‘’WHAT WAS THAT!?’’ they said ‘’this is too creepy let's go’’ said the 1st one so they all went back home when they woke up they did google meet again and all of them would always join. When they were on suddenly they knew the 1st one was missing! ‘’Where is he?’’ said the second ‘’ it might be all about that wierd creek last night’’ said the third one. ‘’Oh no!’’ shouted the second.’’ He's gone!’’ ‘’maybe we shouldn't have gone here’’ said the third. ‘’Everybody we can fix this we need to go there today not wait tonight’’ said the 10nth the 10nth is the leader. So they went to go find the 1st today and it was already night! ‘’How!?’’ said the second. ‘’Okay every time we go here it turns night’’ said the 3rd. ‘’ MAYBE THERE MIGHT BE A MONSTER!!’’ said the 4th, Oh don’t be silly said the 5th. They went inside and they all were already tired ‘’YAwn’’ yawned the second then they all fell on the ground and went to sleep. The next morning the second was missing! They saw him getting carried by a shadow and he was still sleeping. ‘’CATCH IT!!!!!!’’ said the 4th. They saw them tied to a chair and if the shadow new it was seen it would disappear. The shadow turned around and saw them and he disappeared and said ‘’ COME BACKKKK’’ it screamed. Then he threw a dynamite out of the ground when he was getting sucked up. It was set for a minute hey Quickly cut off the ropes and they all ran away. 3 2 1 0! BOOOOOOOM!!!!! Lucky they got out in time but the whole place exploded! So they had to make another news place.
Chapter 2
“Nooooo!!!” said the first. “The shadow might come back!” said the second. “Lets go to the people working and tell them how long it's going to take to get fixed” said the 10nth. “Why?” said the first. “So we can escape and go on a plane”said the 10nth ``ok now i understand” said the first. So they all went to ask the people and they shouted “tomorrow we are really fast builders'' “grrrr” they all groweld. “Now what will we do? We can just Quit!” “why didn't we think about this earlier!?” so they went to go Quit but… the manager was dead! “We can't Quit until another manager comes! Who killed the manager anyways ``''wait look another manager he's coming lets go ask him and see if we can Quit” so they went to ask their new manager and he said yes. “YYYYEEEEAAAAHHHHH!!!!!! YEAH YEAH YEAH YE-``''CALM YA FARM” said the 10nth. “BYE BYE STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID NEWS PLACE!!!!!” said the 1st.